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Nothing
Contributed by
Jen54
on
Sunday, 2nd April 2006 @ 05:12:29 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I have lost all that I am
Wanting our lives to combine
To be as one like we were
But you said no
And with that one little word I died
I’m not really here
Just a memory of what I was
And you’ll live on without me
Cause without you I am nothing
Copyright ©
Jen54
... [
2006-04-02 05:12:29] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Nothing
(User Rating: 1 ) by je2ica3 on
Sunday, 2nd April 2006 @ 08:16:02 AM AEST (User
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never let anyone make you belive your nothing with out them..good rigt |
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Re: Nothing
(User Rating: 1 ) by Butterflygirl40 on
Sunday, 2nd April 2006 @ 10:18:17 AM AEST (User
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This was a short write on this poem! but nice |
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Re: Nothing
(User Rating: 1 ) by slogan on
Sunday, 2nd April 2006 @ 12:08:25 PM AEST (User
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Read my poem "'Fragility of love""... time heals all eventually...jh |
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Re: Nothing
(User Rating: 1 ) by PhantomVampyress on
Sunday, 2nd April 2006 @ 12:50:41 PM AEST (User
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wow I can very well relate to this poem.. this is a awesome write.. i can feel the emotions.. it reminds me of how i feel about someone at times.. this is a short poem but full of pain and hurt.. its very well expressed. you should read my poem say good bye it reminds me of that. I really know this feeling well. time will heal all wounds. great write.. I give you 5 stars
JENNI |
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Re: Nothing
(User Rating: 1 ) by Tiffyo4 on
Sunday, 2nd April 2006 @ 02:37:34 PM AEST (User
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never believe you are nothing. you are a very smart talented person jenny jen jen and i know this . i like this poem a lot and damn the person who made you feel this way
Tiff |
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Re: Nothing
(User Rating: 1 ) by Spazzo on
Sunday, 2nd April 2006 @ 09:51:17 PM AEST (User
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This is a nice poem, I hope things get better for you.
Take care.
Scott |
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