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Bullet Symphony
Contributed by
dark_fighter_chick
on
Saturday, 1st April 2006 @ 11:11:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Anger and hate is all i feel inside
If i told you i love you, then you know i lied
You were never there, and i was always true
There's a bullet in my gun, and i'ts made for you.
The night is still young, but there's no one out
So no one will hear you scream and shout
They won't see the blood left on my hands
I warned you not to lie to me, but you didn't understand
Your down on your knees, praying to God now
Scared for your life, i feel bad for you somehow
You thought that you could just lie to me
But with you blood all around, now you see
Your blood is on the walls, and there's a hole in your head
I never trusted your, and i'll leave you for dead
The life in your eyes slowly fades away
I guess you know by now, this is your dying day
~Cause i can never forget you, i'm sorry, forgive me,
Please just remember on last thing,
~Please remember me in the after life, we could be lovers,
One last thing before you go,
THIS IS ALL YOUR FAULT!
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Re: Bullet Symphony
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by Mild_Tempest on
Saturday, 1st April 2006 @ 11:50:53 PM AEST
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| Powerful and angry, you put it under the right category. I loved the ending, and the poem really was a symphony of bullets. |
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Re: Bullet Symphony
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by ever1der on
Sunday, 2nd April 2006 @ 03:47:39 PM AEST
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| This is really an angry write... |
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