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Outsider
Contributed by
hazelnut
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Saturday, 1st April 2006 @ 10:34:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Pensive thoughts
with tears they fought
Tears that threatened to slide
like raindrops down the windowpane
She swallowed her sorrow, her pain
Braving the cold, she gazed at the warmth inside
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hazelnut
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2006-04-01 22:34:38]
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Re: Outsider
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by Mild_Tempest on
Saturday, 1st April 2006 @ 11:52:39 PM AEST
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| Good analogy. The poem was short but meaningful. And yes, I've felt like an outsider. |
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Re: Outsider
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Sunday, 2nd April 2006 @ 10:09:21 AM AEST
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| Nice poem .. yeah i feel like a outsider also ... keep up the good work:) |
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Re: Outsider
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 2nd April 2006 @ 06:12:22 PM AEST
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| Short but tight in parameters. Outsiders are simply folks being true to themselves. |
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