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Insane
Contributed by
tanyankyle82
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Saturday, 1st April 2006 @ 10:26:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
psychoticpoems
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Do you know?
Can you feel?
My pain is for real.
I can't explain it,
it just doesn't fit.
I feel trapped inside,
with no way out,
nowhere to hide.
No one to hear me if I shout.
Something locked me up,
threw away the key.
Why me?
My heart feels hollow,
like I have no soul.
Why me?
How much worse can it be?
I feel left behind,
lost in my mind.
In a pit of despair,
does anyone care?
I feel alone in here,
with everything to fear.
In a world by myself,
can anything help?
I need to find a way out of this,
nothing will I miss.
The door I need to find,
the way out of my mind.
All thoughts left behind.
I feel like I want to cry,
I don't know why,
a teardrop just fell from my eye.
I feel apart from everything,
insanity is what my mind will bring.
I want the key,
I want to break free.
Why me?
It's coming to insanity.
I feel my rage,
I feel locked in a cage.
In my mind,
I am crying.
The way I need to find,
my heart is dying.
My senses are numb,
there's nowhere to run.
Now I'm lost inside,
I found no place to hide.
My tears start flowing like rain,
I reached the point of insane.
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Re: Insane
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by Jen54 on
Sunday, 2nd April 2006 @ 04:49:18 AM AEST
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I could relate to this. good write
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Re: Insane
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by ever1der on
Sunday, 2nd April 2006 @ 03:26:46 PM AEST
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| long, sad write. I think if you shortened it by bringing some lines together it would work nicely. you know, using commas to join sentences instead of a period? |
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