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Souls intwined
Contributed by
PhantomVampyress
on
Saturday, 1st April 2006 @ 09:00:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Souls intwined
over periods of time
I am his
He is mine
Love flows through
our hearts completion inside
where once was emptiness there
you parted on your way searching for
something and gave me away to the nothingness
letting me fill the void
where you once were
to this day I search for that missing piece
inside that keeps me from being full.. that missing
piece is you
Even though it didn't last
I experienced the greatness of true love
for that I am grateful within
but your not here
I feel so lost without
I know inside
our souls are intwined
and someday you will return to me
for you are mine
JENNI
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PhantomVampyress
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2006-04-01 21:00:31]
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Re: Souls intwined
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by shelby on
Saturday, 1st April 2006 @ 09:39:06 PM AEST
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this is beautiful Jen, I hope he returns to you.
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Re: Souls intwined
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 2nd April 2006 @ 12:50:16 AM AEST
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Another good one Jenni, really well done.
J. |
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Re: Souls intwined
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by BaByBaNaNa on
Sunday, 2nd April 2006 @ 04:19:07 AM AEST
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| this is a beautiful poem, i hope whoever you are writing about returns to you |
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Re: Souls intwined
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by Jen54 on
Wednesday, 12th April 2006 @ 10:54:48 PM AEST
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I can relate to this so much it is kinda scary. It gave me a few butterflies in my stomach. Keep it up!!
-Jen |
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Re: Souls intwined
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 5th July 2006 @ 11:43:52 PM AEST
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Your writting is like aged wine 4 one so young. Crafted skilfully by the hearts own hand. most sincere in it's expression.
Ben |
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Re: Souls intwined
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by fielding88 on
Thursday, 27th July 2006 @ 02:28:15 PM AEST
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| You gave this an uplifting ending, you don't usually see that when you hear someone's parted. This was a nice read, full of sentiment and hope, which is always a pleasure to read. |
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Re: Souls intwined
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by Uncertain_Oblivion on
Tuesday, 5th September 2006 @ 12:02:33 PM AEST
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This was so beautifully sad. I loved it.
Gorgeous...simply. |
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Re: Souls intwined
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by myheartsvoice on
Sunday, 4th February 2007 @ 04:43:16 PM AEST
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I read this twice i gotta say i realy enjoyed it hope you have more new stuff i'm running out of your poems to read and comment on lol. Truly a deep sentiment in this poem, a well crafted artist you are.
thank you also for your comment.
myheartsvoice
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