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MY LIFE
Contributed by
Tiffyo4
on
Saturday, 1st April 2006 @ 12:55:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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My life has fallen into a deep black hole
leaving everyone feeling very unknown
i see my lfe flash before my eyes
as my body floats around a big black sky
disappearing into thin air
taking my beatings like i don't care
trying to hold back tears of the fight
breathing stops time to say goodnite
blood dropping from the sky
as if god himself had died
andels crying and pleding
to stop all the lieing and deciving
pain is nothing more then a memorie
small cuts everywhere just think how deep they could be
drinking blood with devils
dieing in my sleep with many secrets i could keep
Copyright ©
Tiffyo4
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2006-04-01 12:55:23]
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Re: MY LIFE
(User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on
Saturday, 1st April 2006 @ 01:48:54 PM AEST
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| This is an interesting poem if only for the pleading to repent and the relenting of past deeds. There is a question left unanswered in this poem that speaks of impact and actions in the future. I view this a a crossroads poem one that will dictate actions or soon be forgotten and that is what makes it inspirational. |
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Re: MY LIFE
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by Serendippitty on
Saturday, 1st April 2006 @ 01:52:23 PM AEST
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| interesting... but i like |
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Re: MY LIFE
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by no_1nos_me on
Saturday, 1st April 2006 @ 03:55:28 PM AEST
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| Very nice I liked it |
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