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Abba
Contributed by
Somnium
on
Saturday, 1st April 2006 @ 06:25:11 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Sweet dreams are all
I have left now
As this life starts to take
hold of me
Washing out of me
thick red life
pouring down your
gutter mouth
Please drink this
it's all of me
just one glass?
have another
I'll pour two
and we'll drink
me together
Like good friends
As i let my butterfingers
let go of conciusness
Ill slip into your
dreams and see
whatever it is you
want me to
I see a mount
I see a cross
This is your saviour
This pathetic beaten
blood soaked insulted
wretch
Nailed up for all to
see and hate
If he's god then
why did he let this happen
You think this is a gift
if he's just going to come back
to life
anyway
Your stupider than
I thought
But yet
I do see
a love in his eyes
he knows this will
save you
and me
Maybe Iv been
too hasty with you
Take another drink
I need to stay
in this dream with him
Ill give him whatever
if he'll let me in
on this sweet deal
you got going on.
I leave it all behind
life
loves
for this
a somnium
of sacrifice
in cruci figo
Abba
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Somnium
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2006-04-01 06:25:11]
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Re: Abba
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 1st April 2006 @ 06:51:13 AM AEST
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This is a very interesting piece.
to be honest when I saw the title I thought omg not a swedish pop group tribute!
I like the idea of somebody "drinking me in" am I right to assume there is bitterness in these words towards a loved or an ex loved one?
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Re: Abba
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by Jackee_line on
Saturday, 1st April 2006 @ 07:03:44 AM AEST
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| well done,a fine write |
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Re: Abba
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by chaos78 on
Saturday, 1st April 2006 @ 07:47:34 AM AEST
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this is a good write an interesting piece.
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