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Starting Over
Contributed by
lillyjane
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Saturday, 1st April 2006 @ 06:15:41 AM in AEST
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My heart is unburdened my souls been set free,
beautiful dreams returning to me,
I longed for the moment my eyes would not mist,
feeling at last I really exist,
The grass looks much greener,the skys a clear blue,
the smell of spring flowers, the damp smell of dew,
looking forward no longer back,
my demons are gone, no longer attack,
The world is my oyster, now I can see,
there is wonderful things waiting for me,
I now enjoy sunshine, even the rain,
I'll never return to that dark place again..
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2006-04-01 06:15:41]
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Re: Starting Over
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by Jackee_line on
Saturday, 1st April 2006 @ 07:06:17 AM AEST
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I can relate to this poem.
When the fog is lifted you are surprised at how the world is a beautiful place.
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Re: Starting Over
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by chaos78 on
Saturday, 1st April 2006 @ 07:52:24 AM AEST
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i love this poem can't wait to feel what u feel
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Re: Starting Over
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by Archie on
Saturday, 1st April 2006 @ 10:32:51 AM AEST
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| These are great lines. I am inspired by them because that is where I am trying to get. Thanks for sharing that you have reached your goal. |
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Re: Starting Over
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by Asthenia on
Saturday, 1st April 2006 @ 10:35:59 AM AEST
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I can absolutely relate to this...I had been depressed for awhile and then one night I just totally broke down and prayed to God to take it all away and He did...I mean, sure I still have "those days", but who doesn't? I havn't felt so weightless in a long time :)
I hope things continue to keep getting better for you :)
Thank you for this poem, i like it a lot, feel like I could have written it myself! |
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Re: Starting Over
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by maestar on
Saturday, 1st April 2006 @ 02:28:18 PM AEST
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I'm so happy that you feel like the world is yours for the taking, I know that you have been going through a hard time and it is so great that your feeling better.
love
holly-mae
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Re: Starting Over
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by Manda2 on
Tuesday, 11th April 2006 @ 12:47:19 PM AEST
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| I'm so glad you're back! The world is a brighter place with your smile.xxxxxxxxxxxxx |
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