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Breathe With Me
Contributed by
Logan
on
Saturday, 1st April 2006 @ 01:32:09 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Is there something wrong with me?
I don't know what to do.
When Im awake and when Im asleep,
I only think of you.
You're in my dreams and on my mind.
Still running through my head.
A place for peace is hard to find
Even in my bed.
My thoughts are racing
And my mind is waging
A war against myself.
I tried to just forget it all,
But I remember it so well.
Nothing's perfect except memories
And thats all that i have left
So in my mind you're here with me
Sharing every breath.......
Copyright ©
Logan
... [
2006-04-01 01:32:09]
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Re: Breathe With Me
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 1st April 2006 @ 09:19:32 AM AEST
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Wow....you've written exactly how I feel about a good friend of mine....Well done!!
I couldn't have said it better myself..
Jenni |
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Re: Breathe With Me
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by SmartBlonde on
Monday, 3rd April 2006 @ 03:21:20 PM AEST
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| awesome. it puts into words what so many people feel. i like it! |
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Re: Breathe With Me
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by Concrete_Rose on
Friday, 21st April 2006 @ 01:37:58 PM AEST
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| BEAUTIFUL POEM... |
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Re: Breathe With Me
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by Keilantra on
Monday, 10th July 2006 @ 11:59:50 PM AEST
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the ednig line was great!
xXx
~kei |
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