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The Disconsolate Farewell
Contributed by
MyNameIsJonas
on
Saturday, 1st April 2006 @ 01:22:29 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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The memories of the past
The events that didn't last
The dissonance of your voice
You screaming out your choice
The noise is compelling
But the sound is overwhelming
The scars of my mind
The way they define
The cause of my pain
Hidden within the rain
Disgusting my tears
And all of the my fears
With my fright of losing you
Well, I guess I just knew
In the case that it comes true
I would have no clue
On what I should do
But all I can say is "adieu"
3/31/06
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2006-04-01 01:22:29]
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Re: The Disconsolate Farewell
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by PhantomVampyress on
Saturday, 1st April 2006 @ 01:30:46 AM AEST
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very good write.. its well expressed to say goodbye.. a very felt write.. thanks for sharing
JENNI |
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Re: The Disconsolate Farewell
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by Mild_Tempest on
Saturday, 1st April 2006 @ 01:56:14 AM AEST
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| Short, to the point, and meaningful. Nice rythmn and rhyme. A perfect poem. |
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