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Looking Deep Inside
Contributed by
lilbabe
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Friday, 31st March 2006 @ 10:42:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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every hit i take
only reminds me more of
what you did, i cant forget
i cant just move on
like i've done a million times before
i've seen it all, seen into your soul
i've known it all along
now i cant turn away
from all the pain i saw in your eyes
why'd you have to tell me all about you
why'd you have to show me the scars on your wrist
the scars on your heart too, i know
but i cant save you one too many times
from the things you never show
i can only turn and walk away
& try to forget wat i saw in your eyes
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lilbabe
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2006-03-31 22:42:50]
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Re: Looking Deep Inside
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 1st April 2006 @ 11:06:44 AM AEST
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such a sad poem...speaks of rue emotions. Sometimes we all see things so painful and sad we wish we could forget...just erase, hit the delete key and rewind...
great write, truly wonderful poem
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Re: Looking Deep Inside
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 1st April 2006 @ 04:13:27 PM AEST
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| Very nice way to show your emotions but don't give up on somebody espically if they are going through a rough time and when they push you away that is when they need somebody the most. Good write |
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Re: Looking Deep Inside
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by Craze on
Thursday, 20th April 2006 @ 07:59:38 AM AEST
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| This poem sounds like you have letting go issues but i thought it was cool |
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Re: Looking Deep Inside
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by redtears on
Saturday, 22nd April 2006 @ 05:28:43 PM AEST
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| i agree with everyone else, lovely poem but never give up on someone that needs your help! |
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