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Give Away
Contributed by
Sinned
on
Friday, 31st March 2006 @ 06:04:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Tears wouldn't fill my eyes
I had water on my brain
You don't know how much you mean
All these years
Now I have to let go
How can anyone give away
One that means so much
Sigh
Believe me I wanted to cry
Your dad the macho man
Soft as putty
You mould me yet I scold
The year you turned fifteen
Sigh
In my chair I sit and wonder why
I see you in younger years
Eighteen months
Rosy cheeks
Curly hair
Sigh
God I
Yes we have room
Yes go get her I said
Jesus comes in either sex
A stranger you may meet
Sigh
To the store and dresses I buy
Frilly things
Laces and pink
Eighteen months
You were born to me
Sigh
Grown men don't cry
Thinking back
You are young a toddler
Then wishing to be eleven or twelve
Fifteen sixteen
Sigh
I wipe my eyes
Moisture you won't see
I held beauty on my lap
Now I must set you free
I don't want to
Sigh
Christmas and glory be's on high
An angel
Teen years and I had to slap
Answers I didn't know
I love You
Sigh
Family visits and family dies
You're a woman
Eighteen months you came to me
Sent from God I truly believe
Pink panties and frilly lace
Sigh
Today I set you aside
Ringlets such pretty hair
Tiara sparkling
A groom so proud
Handsome too
Sigh
By the truth of life I abide
I hugged my beauty today
Jesus hold them very close
To love honor and obey
Till death do we part
Sigh
Of all the words I cannot describe
Daughter of how I feel
Father no I am not the best
All of these many years
I held you inside of me
Sigh
I reminisce and wonder why
You love me as you do
Rosy cheeks and curly hair
A beautiful white dress
Ringlets so beautiful
Sigh
Daugher my eyes are dry
My heart goes bump de bump
Each beat is hard
I held beauty ever close
Now you're married to love and hold
Sigh
Time will pass bye and bye
In happiess I write this poem
In sadness I to write this poem
Live your lives the best you can
You are married now go live as one
I am happy and no longer
Sigh
To Brian and Mary Ann
To love and to hold
For evermore
Sinned
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Sinned
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Re: Give Away
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by PhantomVampyress on
Saturday, 1st April 2006 @ 01:25:29 AM AEST
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wow this is a very emotion felt poem.. there is alot of happy and sad emotions felt it this.. I enjoyed reading this.. very felt.. thanks for sharing
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Re: Give Away
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by Elizabeth_Dandy on
Saturday, 1st April 2006 @ 05:10:16 PM AEST
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Absolutely beautiful. So much love and tenderness. Oh is it ever hard to let go. Isn't it?
A small death, - I believe death will be easier if we have to go through small deaths in our life time.
The poem construction wit those small pyramides is exquisite.
Thanks so much for sharing Dennis
Blessings
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Re: Give Away
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Thursday, 6th April 2006 @ 11:21:20 AM AEST
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Dennis, this was a beautiful heart felt poem.. I liked it very much.. Thank you for commenting on my poems.. It means alot..
take care
christina |
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Re: Give Away
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 9th April 2006 @ 11:29:03 AM AEST
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How beautiful...and so touching... This really brought a smile and a tear to my face..
Well done..
Jenni |
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Re: Give Away
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by Spazzo on
Monday, 10th April 2006 @ 01:35:15 PM AEST
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A beautiful and heart felt poem.
Take care.
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Re: Give Away
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 26th April 2006 @ 05:01:11 AM AEST
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Very touching, tender, emotional write straite from the heart.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Give Away
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Thursday, 25th May 2006 @ 10:37:20 PM AEST
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Dennis~
How beautiful and touching are your words. They bought a smile to my face and tears to fill my eyes. I wish Brian and Mary Ann a lifetime of love, joy and happiness together.
Simply beautiful Dennis~
warm hugs,
~*suzie Q*~ |
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Re: Give Away
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by PhantomVampyress on
Tuesday, 11th July 2006 @ 07:21:22 PM AEST
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wow this is beautiful and very well expressed i loved the last line.. thanks for sharing
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