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Fly
Contributed by
ravendominique
on
Friday, 31st March 2006 @ 12:41:24 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Another day full of pain.
All the tears and all the shame.
Can't make it stop. Can't make it quit.
Climb real high. Now this is it.
Third-story way up high.
Just pretend you can fly.
Open the window now.
Feel the breeze. One last vow.
Spread your arms, close your eyes.
This is how the sad one dies.
Falling down, no worries now.
End the pain and this is how.
Copyright ©
ravendominique
... [
2006-03-31 00:41:24]
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Re: Fly
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 31st March 2006 @ 12:58:50 AM AEST
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| I feel the pain that you must be in. Sometimes it seems the only way you can deal w/everything is by not and giving up for I feel like this alot lately. Hope it gets better for you. Good write |
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Re: Fly
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by freespirit on
Friday, 31st March 2006 @ 12:44:57 PM AEST
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God gave you life look around and see the beauty
freespirt |
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Re: Fly
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by bethers_is_my_baby on
Friday, 31st March 2006 @ 04:03:55 PM AEST
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| short, to the point, and very powerfull! well done! |
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