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THE END
Contributed by
Tiffyo4
on
Thursday, 30th March 2006 @ 08:41:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I day dream about my life
how it will end and begin again
about my blood leaving my body
and falling and splashing as it hits the floor
the razor just sits there on the counter
my body starts to feel weak
i dreft to a deep sleep
while searching for my soul to keep
devils floating around in my head
telling me to do it and do it again
i lay lifeless and my body just died
my dreams have come true
my life has come to an end
now i don't have to pretend
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Tiffyo4
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2006-03-30 20:41:22]
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Re: THE END
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by no_1nos_me on
Thursday, 30th March 2006 @ 08:59:17 PM AEST
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Hey you Know I like your work and this shows why
Good job keep it up |
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Re: THE END
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by MG_Akela22090 on
Friday, 31st March 2006 @ 01:49:01 PM AEST
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| Deadly and beautiful. Amazing, I write a lot on this subject to. It really speaks to me. |
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