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You Love Me
Contributed by
MG_Akela22090
on
Thursday, 30th March 2006 @ 07:23:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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You love me, but you don’t know me. You love me but you don’t see me. I’m here, but yet I’m gone. I’m absent from your life except when you want. What was I meant for? What am I meant for? What am I to you?
I feel like a puppet strung up for your amusement. I don’t feel real, what am I but another person? You love me. You need me. You want me, but yet, I’m not here.
Have I disappeared? Am I invisible to the world? Do they know me? Do they see me? Do they care?
I’m stuck here. I’m lost here. I’m drifting away from you. Do they see me as I fade? Do I look real? Am I real? Nothing’s real anymore…
You love me, but you don’t know me. You love me, but I’m not really there. You love me; I’m your world, but I’m starting to disappear. You love me, but I’m not really yours anymore.
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Re: You Love Me
(User Rating: 1 ) by no_1nos_me on
Thursday, 30th March 2006 @ 08:40:45 PM AEST (User
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I liked this it shows real emotion |
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Re: You Love Me
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Friday, 31st March 2006 @ 01:04:42 AM AEST (User
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Very strong emotions coming from this. I can feel the pain and hurt that you have put into this. I can relate to this for I have also wandered something simlar to this before. Good write |
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Re: You Love Me
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jen54 on
Sunday, 2nd April 2006 @ 04:38:00 AM AEST (User
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I really like this poem. It shares an emotion that everyone can relate to at one point in their lives. Great job and keep up the great writing.
-Jen |
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