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Thoughts
Contributed by
silver_runaway
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Thursday, 30th March 2006 @ 11:02:43 AM in AEST
Topic:
insomniac
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Shadows, memories; everyone around you has a secret they hide
Everything in the past has a story
Laughter, tears; they go hand in hand
Life can make you so tired
Belief, thoughts; contradiction makes the world go ‘round
Trust what your heart sees, not your eyes
Honesty, betrayal; without one can the other really exist?
The rain can sometimes be so cold
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Re: Thoughts
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by snowflake on
Thursday, 30th March 2006 @ 11:21:07 AM AEST
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| GREAT WRITE!!! |
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Re: Thoughts
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 30th March 2006 @ 11:44:06 AM AEST
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| Well never thought about those before. Something for me to think about when i can't sleep. Good write. |
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Re: Thoughts
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by ever1der on
Thursday, 30th March 2006 @ 12:58:50 PM AEST
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| This was a very nice write. I enjoyed the piece about honesty and betrayal.. |
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Re: Thoughts
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by lostinmyself on
Thursday, 30th March 2006 @ 04:17:11 PM AEST
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I like some of the thoughts in this, actually. I would not really call this piece a poem, but I am not exactly sure why that is.
I can't say I really have a favourite line, I really just like them all.
Good write
Phil xxx |
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Re: Thoughts
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by Fionndruinne on
Thursday, 30th March 2006 @ 05:14:48 PM AEST
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Your language flows nicely. These thoughts are a little disembodied, but interesting, and well-put.
Andrew |
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