|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
The Edge of First Light And So On
Contributed by
Onslaught
on
Thursday, 30th March 2006 @ 03:22:06 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
|
I am insane, and I want to
Extend
No plan for the armada
But its time to stretch my mental knees
Metaphoric
Ally
And approach the awakening
Ever awaiting
intellectual dawn
And Stand
The rich are getting richer
And the poor are getting poorer
Though the smart are getting smarter
The fools
Have never had it so good
The greedy
Are broadening their reach
And the cruel
Are becoming inhumanely vicious
There is no need to plant
The planted seeds once more
There is nothing left standing for me
What you see is what you see
All things will come from me
For I am the people
I am the blood of the Earth
I am everything
All that transpires
The space that surrounds the stars
In your eyes
At night
The light from within
That illuminates the twilight
On the horizon
Of our cities and population
That brings about change
Here and now
It all comes together
I am insane, and I want to
Extend
No plan for the armada
But its time to stretch my mental knees
Metaphoric
Ally
And approach the awakening
Ever awaiting
intellectual dawn
And Stand
Copyright ©
Onslaught
... [
2006-03-30 03:22:06]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: The Edge of First Light And So On
(User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on
Thursday, 30th March 2006 @ 04:03:50 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Strongly written, with some very fine lines. I like the message as well. Well done.
Andrew |
|
|
Re: The Edge of First Light And So On
(User Rating: 1 )
by assassinatorgirl on
Thursday, 30th March 2006 @ 05:39:29 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
My husband is a genius :)
Es ist wunderbar, meine liebste. If only more people saw things as you do, then maybe the fools wouldn't be so well off. *thinks of several that are*
I guess as time goes on, people just become more and more defined in who they are and what they do.
Beautiful write, baby. Can't wait to hear it as a song, if you do make it one. |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
