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Future
Contributed by
AnastasiaN
on
Thursday, 30th March 2006 @ 01:10:10 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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The knocking on my brain
shatters my thoughts
and the prying you do
muddles everything up
You shake me awake
but I'm not alive
You offer me guidance
and I don't know why
You offer me options
but it's all smoke & mirrors
you expect me to know it all
but I can't see through the fear
I'm herded through the gates
along with the rest of the sheep
You push me to make decisions
and promises I know I cannot keep
You tried to squeeze me into a mould
but my insides oozed all out
so when you check for a pulse
it may be hard to make out
Copyright ©
AnastasiaN
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2006-03-30 01:10:10]
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Re: Future
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by twick on
Thursday, 30th March 2006 @ 01:35:38 AM AEST
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| hey thanks for the comment, I had to check out some of your poetry and this one, WOW! I feel like I'm the subject of your poem thats how much those words relate. I just never had anyone to push in a mould except me. I'm definitely going to read more. |
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Re: Future
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by Lo2681 on
Monday, 15th May 2006 @ 11:30:50 PM AEST
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Wow very nicely done. I know the feeling. Amazing write though. It seems as though it comes easy to you. Keep it up I look orward to reading more of your work:)
~Lo |
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