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Darkness of her Heart
Contributed by
BrutalSoul73
on
Wednesday, 29th March 2006 @ 09:45:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
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"Darkness of her Heart"
by: $av $auci 3/2004
Falling forever
neverending it seems
like trying to awaken
from
nightmare dreams.......
Giving up all
Hope
while clenching
your chest,
but still trying not
to let
Soul
come to rest...
Clinging to
Life
while your
fingernails break
that's when
your
Enemies
choose this
time to awake,
I'm screaming
out at the
White Light
above
Then into the
Darkness
flies
A
Beautiful
Dove,
but she to
is
Consumed
and quickly
must depart,
for noone
can save you
from
"The Darkness of her Heart"...................
orig work
by:dana lynn 3/2004
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Re: Darkness of her Heart
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by EvaLastingRose on
Wednesday, 29th March 2006 @ 10:03:23 PM AEST
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damn this is my def favorite poem on this site wow i cant stop readin it the perfect rhythem makes it flow very nicely and the deepness is def amazing i write similar poems like this so i can relate to this one which i like the openin lines r great and the ending had me wowed!!
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Re: Darkness of her Heart
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by midnightwriter on
Wednesday, 29th March 2006 @ 10:08:23 PM AEST
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| very beautiful |
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Re: Darkness of her Heart
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by Vio_Troppi951 on
Wednesday, 29th March 2006 @ 11:25:18 PM AEST
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| All I have to say to this poem is WOW!! very nicely written........ keep it up |
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Re: Darkness of her Heart
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by MorningDove on
Thursday, 30th March 2006 @ 11:09:32 AM AEST
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This is beautiful, to say the least. If your heart and soul want to be a white dove, the darlin, you have only to ask God and you shall be. No one can keep us from being what we want to be, no one, only ourselves. Sometimes it takes distancing ourselves from those we were around. Quit listening to those who work to bring you down. Listen to what you know is right. God does not make mistakes, only people do. You were a pure white dove the day you were born. Just do everything you can to erase the past, forget it and strive forward from now on. Bringing only the lessons learned so you will never have to look at the past or the people there again. Just ask God. He is always with you.
Rita |
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Re: Darkness of her Heart
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Thursday, 30th March 2006 @ 11:40:06 AM AEST
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This was really good. I liked it alot.. especially the title.. Great poem
take care
christina |
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Re: Darkness of her Heart
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by Teddy on
Friday, 31st March 2006 @ 05:07:41 AM AEST
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| Wow. thats dark... i love it |
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