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That Genuine Feeling

Contributed by jrod56 on Wednesday, 29th March 2006 @ 09:38:08 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

I can't say what day it was or even what time it was when you came into the cafe. But i know without a doubt that it was my first day to breathe. your smile shined and lit up the darkest of my secrets. For once the heavy weight that rests relentlessly on my shoulders was lifted for a brief second. Your walk was as is you were floating as an angel would when she first got her wings. I felt she as if I couldn't even look at you, rare, for an out going person. My heart fluttered and skipped beats as if it was dancing to a rhythym when you approached. You looked at me with those beautifuls eyes and asked how my day was going. I couldn't hardly catch my breath and I squeaked out, ' Fine thank you'. knowing deep inside I wanted to scream out, 'Its the best i have known in a long time'. Without hesitation she spoke softly saying, 'Well thats good', 'Have a Nice day'. Then walked just as graciously back out of my life just as she had came in. I wanted terribly to stop her and tell her how she made me feel even though she probably didn't feel the same. Was it fate that enterfered or was it just simply another case of cold feet. But i know for the first time in a life full of grief, heartache, and misfortune, I had felt for the first time. That Genuine Feeling.

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Re: That Genuine Feeling (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 29th March 2006 @ 09:44:21 PM AEST
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I think this is a sweet poem,

LG

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