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Closer to whole
Contributed by
Genevieve
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Wednesday, 29th March 2006 @ 07:42:27 PM in AEST
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I learned a little late
But better late than never, i guess.
I have learned a lot
But never the less
I have learned how to love.
It all seems so surreal now
Whenever I look back
Look back at how distructive I was
Before I meet you.
You have been a savior to me
Allowing me to see life clearly
Allowing me to god.
So now I love because I am
Because I am closer to whole than ever before
Peiced together by patience and courage
I love because I am closer to whole than ever before.
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Genevieve
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2006-03-29 19:42:27]
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Re: Closer to whole
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by twick on
Wednesday, 29th March 2006 @ 08:06:12 PM AEST
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| this was really sweet. i normally don't like this kind of poetry but this just said something to me. |
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Re: Closer to whole
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by In_a_while on
Wednesday, 29th March 2006 @ 08:47:51 PM AEST
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very good piece of writing... heartfelt and reflective.
i like it a lot. i hope to read more sometime
keep it up! |
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Re: Closer to whole
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 29th March 2006 @ 08:57:38 PM AEST
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Yes, each day we learn just a little more, our life is lessons learned. Better late than never is a positive approach to knowing you have and will for the rest of your life. Teach others what you learned, most beautiful lessons, lessons that will increase love.
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Re: Closer to whole
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by Emmanuel on
Wednesday, 5th April 2006 @ 02:33:28 PM AEST
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| I liked it, but I have a question, how do you know you "learned a little late" what if you learned when you were meant to? |
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