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Existance
Contributed by
SAT
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Wednesday, 29th March 2006 @ 06:41:16 PM in AEST
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I am the idea. I am the concept. I am the ghost that shines in the eyes of your love.
I am the passion that floods your heart. I am the crack in the wall around your emotions.
I have countless faces in countless lifetimes, but have no face.
I speak of the deepest emotions to a sea of lovers, but have no voice.
I embrace countless bodies and countless hearts, but have no hands.
I am the wind that chills your skin when love is gone for the day.
I am the river that pours from your eyes when love is absent.
I am the fire that melts the purest of hearts.
I exist, and I do not.
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SAT
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2006-03-29 18:41:16]
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Re: Existance
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 29th March 2006 @ 07:40:52 PM AEST
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| This is a powerful write; feeled w/lot of emotions. Enjoyed reading it |
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Re: Existance
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by Onslaught on
Thursday, 30th March 2006 @ 03:36:02 AM AEST
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| Wow, yes, impressive, i liked it a lot. Its a bummer that theres no way for me to read every poem ever created, to get to read all the great things and emotions people have been able to jot down and put to paper, but i liked this a lot and i believe that if this did not fully more than make up for that lack of ability it certainly did lighten the load of that unfortunate happenstance. great job, keep it up. |
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Re: Existance
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by Onslaught on
Thursday, 30th March 2006 @ 03:37:41 AM AEST
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| In other words, i'm glad i got a chance to read this. |
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Re: Existance
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by hearts4pain on
Thursday, 30th March 2006 @ 10:14:22 AM AEST
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i love this poem
it makes me think. what are you?
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Re: Existance
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by SAT on
Friday, 31st March 2006 @ 01:57:58 PM AEST
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The way you wonder what i am
the way your questions appear
the face of curiousity is satisfied
i am everything visible and not
but i dont exist- only in your heart |
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