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living here
Contributed by
lilbabe
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Wednesday, 29th March 2006 @ 05:26:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
toughstuff
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everydays the same
i come home to this
where scars & lies are hidden
theres no truth
love is just a distant memory
so please tell me why i stay
i used to live happily
before all this disaster
now i cry & no one sees my tears
i guess this is how its gonna be
i can only hope & pray
things will change
tho deep inside, i no they wont
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Re: living here
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by PRECIOUSBECKY on
Wednesday, 29th March 2006 @ 05:47:22 PM AEST
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| I LOVE THE THIRD LINE " WHERE SCARS & LIES ARE HIDDEN" I CAN TOTALLY RELATE TO THAT AND I CAN ONLY PRAY THAT YOU MAKE AN ESCAPE BEFORE YOU WASTE ANOTHER BITTER TEAR..... GOOD WRITING KEEP IT UP |
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Re: living here
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by Jackee_line on
Wednesday, 29th March 2006 @ 06:30:04 PM AEST
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| well done, I can relate |
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Re: living here
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by romance_pyro on
Wednesday, 29th March 2006 @ 09:29:07 PM AEST
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| I cant Relate but i know a friend that can I have always confornted my problems and mastered them. I will not be able to conquer everything in life but i will try so stay strong and fight for what makes you happy. Good poem |
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Re: living here
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by summer on
Wednesday, 29th March 2006 @ 11:01:11 PM AEST
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| Great poem, I hope things change for you X |
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