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With You
Contributed by
Garret
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Wednesday, 29th March 2006 @ 04:15:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Eight years ago,
Is when I first saw you.
You were different,
And so was I.
I was the only one,
That really saw you.
That saw past the shell,
And it scared you.
You started drinking,
Smoking, and doing pot.
You were desperately trying
To fit into a place that didn’t like you,
But I saw a cry for help.
And I tried to help,
And you started to let me.
We were together,
And I treated you like no other had.
I showed you that you were perfect,
Just they way you were.
Then for some reason,
You left.
And I was in the dust,
Only to see you once in a while.
You’ve had other guys,
But all have hurt you.
I am the only one,
Who never hurt you.
You are different.
I still feel for you,
How I did all those years ago.
If not exactly so,
Then even more.
I still see in you,
What no one else does
All I want now,
Is to be with you.
Copyright ©
Garret
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2006-03-29 16:15:04]
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Re: With You
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by landsmith2001 on
Wednesday, 29th March 2006 @ 04:34:52 PM AEST
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| its futile trying to change people, they will appreciate your concern but will never be who you want them to be....please move on for your own happiness |
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Re: With You
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by romance_pyro on
Wednesday, 29th March 2006 @ 09:26:03 PM AEST
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| Wow nice write man i know how you feel i still see my old friend and we talk every now and then but we can never be together again because I will never be there for here. She will understand one day if not already. Nice write |
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Re: With You
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 31st March 2006 @ 06:39:36 PM AEST
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There is great sadness and longing in your words.
Great writing.
J |
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Re: With You
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by Man_On_High on
Saturday, 1st April 2006 @ 02:45:49 AM AEST
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In all my time here, I have never read anything so heart-wrenching..('tis true)
During my formative years, I had a girlfriend who was , actually a friend of my younger sister-
she loved me!
(we were each other's first!)...shhhh!
nuff said..
Anyway, as time went on..
she never lost that impressionable feeling
that our childhood crush lay upon her..(and me)~
..and so now...I regret it - everyday.
These words are relative to me and conjure up
some fantastic recollectionons...
Very moving-
Billy |
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Re: With You
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by Archie on
Wednesday, 5th April 2006 @ 03:09:50 PM AEST
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I know this is a tough time for you. Your poem reminded me of one of my favorite songs.
"Little again you are blue
Another boy has gone and left you
I see you come back to me your best friend
To tell another tragic story again
Once again you'll look in my eyes
and once again you will not realise
That I'm the one who loves you. . ."
Quote from "I'm the one who loves you" by Curtis Mayfield
You have expressed your heart well in this poem. |
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