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Never Like Me
Contributed by
whiteleo1984
on
Wednesday, 29th March 2006 @ 04:08:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Cursed and all alone
why do I allow myself to fall?
what's next for me?
will I ever hear Your call?
what's the point of life and love?
will I ever feel right one more time?
who cares what the future holds?
and who wants a love like mine?
Give me a black rose, throw it on my grave
show me the truth of myself
and of the life that I made
don't look at me like you do him
remember how much I care
and never let the light dim
shine, shine your light so the world can know
that you are still around
and you're love I will hold
I can wait for forever if that's what it will take
will you ever wake up and see
of the truth that it can make
look into my eyes and see my pain
look into my soul and see my love
know that you have so much to gain
if you'll just open up
care and happiness I can give
but who knows of it you will recieve?
don't you want to really live
and forget of all your hate
look inside and feel free
make yourself a whole person
and never end up like me
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Re: Never Like Me
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by hardcoreputa on
Wednesday, 29th March 2006 @ 05:22:31 PM AEST
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| truely amazingly dark. great flow. keep writing ~Apryl |
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Re: Never Like Me
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by Alison on
Wednesday, 29th March 2006 @ 06:18:24 PM AEST
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| very well written, great, but sad feeling. makes the reader think about life. awesome job. |
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