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I Love You
Contributed by
redtempest13
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Wednesday, 29th March 2006 @ 02:58:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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That first day was odd from the start,
I wasn't supposed to be there,
But Fate was paying close attention,
And love was in the air.
I had no idea when I first met you,
Of what would come to pass,
All I wanted was a friend,
What I got was a love to last.
You've brought me out of my shell,
You've healed my heart so true,
You've made me happy beyond compare,
With all my heart, I do love you.
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2006-03-29 14:58:19]
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Re: I Love You
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by dougnut on
Wednesday, 29th March 2006 @ 03:26:48 PM AEST
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Sound like Love to me.
great read beautiful write.
good luck.
doug:-) |
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Re: I Love You
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by romance_pyro on
Wednesday, 29th March 2006 @ 09:17:52 PM AEST
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| Very Nice Write man. I hope yall live happy and everyafter ;) |
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Re: I Love You
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by slogan on
Thursday, 30th March 2006 @ 12:42:04 AM AEST
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| excellent write...expressive and honest...nicely done...jh |
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Re: I Love You
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by AnastasiaN on
Thursday, 30th March 2006 @ 01:20:24 AM AEST
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| well thanks for this write...i needed something to cheer me up and this did just that. i feel very similar to this and i just needed someone else to reaffirm that feeling as we are far apart. great poem, good luck! |
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Re: I Love You
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by tears_of_blood on
Friday, 31st March 2006 @ 02:14:43 AM AEST
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| just a good poem it was so good rightto the point and makes you feel every one keep it up well done. |
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