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Ripple
Contributed by
Davinah
on
Wednesday, 29th March 2006 @ 03:10:17 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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No time for elegance
You are a picture of loneliness
As you stumble in your darkness
Dragging yourself along
Oh, how those blue eyes weep
Yet without tears left to shed
The sorrow that you cannot hide
Is written in those still blue waters
Do you ever dream of me
When night has fallen over you
The touch I bring you say you love
That reaches through your emptiness
I could fill your empty spaces
Make you long for the divine
I could give you all of my passion
And cause a ripple in your still blue waters
Copyright ©
Davinah
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2006-03-29 03:10:17]
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Re: Ripple
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by no_1nos_me on
Wednesday, 29th March 2006 @ 08:49:56 PM AEST
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Re: Ripple
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by Spike on
Monday, 3rd April 2006 @ 06:55:44 AM AEST
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Lovely, lyrical and sad, but hope peeks through the verses, ever mindful for a chance to shine.
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Re: Ripple
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by Man_On_High on
Tuesday, 4th April 2006 @ 12:52:48 AM AEST
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It's longing is beautiful
and stirred within me, me own hope
for eternal love..
very rare and hard to come by
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