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Perfect mess ups
Contributed by
hz1059
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Wednesday, 29th March 2006 @ 01:49:11 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Felling the breeze flowing through my hair. The sun is shining down on my body, warming it like fresh towels in the dryer. I can feel the blades of grass grazing my skin, it almost tickles. The leaves dance gracefully as the wind blows progressively from the summer’s sky down through the trees branches. Clouds move slowly making different shapes I let my imagination run wild hoping I can recognize something. I tell myself I could lay here forever in this hour I call bliss, but days come and go just like night turns to day and life to death. Soon it will rain and the rich blue sky will turn to a dark black haze, but maybe soon ill be able to appreciate the calm of the storm that burdens my soul.
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Re: Perfect mess ups
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 29th March 2006 @ 03:16:19 AM AEST
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beautiful images, states of mystery and of sadness. I understand this well. Nicely done.
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Re: Perfect mess ups
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 30th March 2006 @ 04:39:16 PM AEST
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WOW!! This is really awesome!!
Loved it
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