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the end
Contributed by
broken_cookie
on
Tuesday, 28th March 2006 @ 10:47:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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depressed
lonely
understood by no one
the razor cuts my skin
deeper,deeper, deeper it goes
to unvailthe pain that no one knows
tears fill my eyes
tears of pain and of hate
spite fills my heart and my soul
the blood flows out of my vains
and leaves my heart black and torn
slowly i drift away
out of this unwanted life
farther and farther i slip into unconciousness
and finally i reach the glorius end
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2006-03-28 22:47:23]
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Re: the end
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by Mild_Tempest on
Wednesday, 29th March 2006 @ 12:23:22 AM AEST
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| What they say is true, death isn't the worst thing that can happen to you. |
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Re: the end
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by Davinah on
Wednesday, 29th March 2006 @ 03:02:45 AM AEST
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| Death is a beautiful release. |
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Re: the end
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by LiFe_oF_a_SuIcIdAl on
Thursday, 30th March 2006 @ 10:10:33 AM AEST
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| This poem is sooo good. It touched me and almost made me cry! Keep up the awesome work! |
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