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THE PACE SETS ALL
Contributed by
brew
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Tuesday, 28th March 2006 @ 09:56:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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DREAMING
Have you ever had a dream that is so clear
It takes all that you want and gives with out fear
You close the eyes and all appears
To what was there and it makes it so near
KEEPING
In the heart it has been given a chance
For the search you have and much more romance
You have taken the given and turned it over
For the road you chosen is over glowing
" Second chance"... Slow and Caught
Copyright ©
brew
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2006-03-28 21:56:16]
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Re: THE PACE SETS ALL
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by Mild_Tempest on
Wednesday, 29th March 2006 @ 12:29:22 AM AEST
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| Nice analogy. I agree with the poem. |
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Re: THE PACE SETS ALL
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 29th March 2006 @ 02:40:59 AM AEST
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For the road you chosen is over glowing
I love that line good play on words.
When you post under abstract that's exactly what you do make people think i've sat here and read this 6 times now and as i've said before you can interpet in different ways that is the beauty of your art.
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Re: THE PACE SETS ALL
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 29th March 2006 @ 02:57:36 AM AEST
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flowing like a melody, take a bow for this, or I will bow to your poetic greatness.
Michelle |
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Re: THE PACE SETS ALL
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by Spazzo on
Wednesday, 29th March 2006 @ 03:15:41 PM AEST
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Wow, this is awesome.
Take care
Scott |
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Re: THE PACE SETS ALL
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by halli on
Wednesday, 19th April 2006 @ 02:36:48 PM AEST
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i love both brew!
~hugs
halli |
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