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Memories Or Dreams
Contributed by
romance_pyro
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Tuesday, 28th March 2006 @ 06:23:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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Why does your memory stay
No matter how far I go away
In a sea of blue
Your face appears on a cloud
The only one
Not covered by a dark shroud
Days have passed
But my dreams are still the same
My heart and love
I wonder will it ever change
Do you remember
That night we laid there
Just watching
The lightning race through the air
Or how about the time
We walked it seemed for hours
Along the beach in a dying sunset
Holding you hand, Being your tower
Once we lay
Outside gazing into the stars
Holding each other tightly
Not understanding why we had to be apart
But I left
With almost no warning
And I could not bear
The thought of seeing you mourning
Our lives now torn
Shattered pieces unable to mend
How can this be
Niether wanting it to end
I lay awake now
Wondering and trying to see
Was this Our memories,
Or was it mearly my dream.
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Re: Memories Or Dreams
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 28th March 2006 @ 07:00:42 PM AEST
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i love this poem! it's sweet, and beautiful...wow. i can;t explain it...but there's somthing truly amazing about it
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Re: Memories Or Dreams
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by snowflake on
Wednesday, 29th March 2006 @ 10:43:25 AM AEST
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NIce write i like the flow of it my favorite lines were:
I lay awake now
Wondering and trying to see
Was this Our memories,
Or was it mearly my dream.
I Like it alot great talent
*~bRiI~* |
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Re: Memories Or Dreams
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by crazy on
Tuesday, 4th April 2006 @ 05:32:46 PM AEST
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| ok.so this is a kool poem ,but i think you still might have some feelings for this person.such a sweet melody the poem sings out.the words all flowing as one.such great passion .and romance_pyro you not such a bad guy.plus your reallyawsome poetry writer.so what ever may have happen it will always hold a place in history of yours or my life. always and forever jessica :) |
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