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Commitment
Contributed by
Jeff_Scott_Morehead
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Tuesday, 28th March 2006 @ 05:11:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Commitment
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If a rose stands for love
Then I present you this bouquet
To express my inner feelings
In the deepest kind of way
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If a kiss seals the deal
Let us simply embrace
Make a commitment forever
Letting nothing go to waste
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If a ring said you're mine
Let me place it on your finger
A promise from my heart
That I will never linger
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If a word tells it all
Then simply say “I do”
And I stay by your side
Until the end of life is through
~
Copyright ©
Jeff_Scott_Morehead
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2006-03-28 17:11:29]
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Re: Commitment
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by lovebug on
Tuesday, 28th March 2006 @ 05:21:11 PM AEST
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THIS IS A VERY WARM AND TOUCHING POEM I HOPE THAT EVERYTHING YOU SAID IN IT HAS HAPPENED FOR YOU . GREAT WRITE KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK.
YOUR FRIEND:
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Re: Commitment
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 28th March 2006 @ 08:11:43 PM AEST
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| Very simple but wonderful write....Mike |
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Re: Commitment
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by xxbreathlessx on
Tuesday, 28th March 2006 @ 09:22:51 PM AEST
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it was simple and sweet!
a poem that goes straight to the heart ! |
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Re: Commitment
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by brew on
Tuesday, 28th March 2006 @ 10:01:34 PM AEST
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Wow.well presented to the undying love for thee.......Beautiful...
Brew~ |
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Re: Commitment
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by Spazzo on
Thursday, 6th April 2006 @ 11:14:41 AM AEST
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A very beautiful poem. It's so sweet.
Take care.
Scott |
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Re: Commitment
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by Archie on
Thursday, 6th April 2006 @ 11:17:42 AM AEST
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| The style of this is very refreshing. The crisp words show a loyal heart to the audience and a true love to be had by one who is just. |
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