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Escape
Contributed by
landsmith2001
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Tuesday, 28th March 2006 @ 05:00:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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Bend and Break,
Break and twist the mould that holds you tight.
It stops you being who you are meant to be.
Stop the vehicle that contains you and walk.
Together.
Back to nature in the sun.
Join us there and have some fun.
Wake to a day that is yours,
For it is yours.
This is our time, our place.
Come feel the glorious sun on your face.
Rest in places of green
Far away from the suppressing scene.
Pull the wires that hold you in place.
Take your wonderfull sole out of that pigeon hole
And free your mind from all this control.
Copyright ©
landsmith2001
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2006-03-28 17:00:38]
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Re: Escape
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by chanceof_promise on
Tuesday, 28th March 2006 @ 06:17:26 PM AEST
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Re: Escape
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 28th March 2006 @ 06:48:47 PM AEST
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| Nice write. Wish I could just escape everything....... |
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Re: Escape
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Thursday, 30th March 2006 @ 11:30:28 AM AEST
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This was a nice poem.. I liked it and nice sensory details..
take care
christina |
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