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GOD???

Contributed by bigbadblinkybill on Tuesday, 28th March 2006 @ 07:44:17 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

WHY DID YOU NOT HELP ME??
YOU SAT THERE STONEY FACED.
YOU WATCHED AS THEY BEAT ME
DIDN'T EVEN LEND A HAND

SITTING ON THE STREET CURB
MOPPING BLOOD FROM 'PON MY BROW
LOOKING AT YOU QUIZZICAL
TRYING TO WORK OUT HOW???

HOW COULD YOU LET THIS HAPPEN TO ME?
NOT EVEN MOVE AN INCH

YOU SEE ALL THE BAD THINGS IN THE WORLD
BUT STILL YOU DO NOT FLINCH

DOES IT REALLY HURT YOU
TO TRY AND GET INVOLVED
OR ARE YOU SO DISCUSTED
AT THE WAY THAT WE'VE EVOLVED

C'MON NOW PLEASE TELL US
PRACTICE WHAT YOU PREECH
DO NOT PUNISH ALL OF MANKIND
COS EQUALITY WAS NEVER REACHED

Copyright © bigbadblinkybill ... [ 2006-03-28 07:44:17]
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Re: GOD??? (User Rating: 1 )
by FRANCO on Sunday, 16th April 2006 @ 06:04:25 AM AEST
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human chorus of disapproval is clearly visible in your poem, you have achieved in reflected it in great style. With shades of truth in it.. good write.
FRANCO

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