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I, Too, Am Real
Contributed by
NoLessons
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Monday, 27th March 2006 @ 10:47:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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"Don't play with me. I'm real."
That's what you said as you told me how much I turned you on, how much I excited you, how beautiful I was.
Four and a half years we spent apart. No contact. No exchange of words or feelings.
We were reunited, and it felt as if no time had passed. We were happy to have found each other. You cried tears of joy over finding me.
A lot can change in three days, I guess.
Now your words confuse me. You speak of our time together as a mistake, a sin.
You regret our reuniting.
I feel hurt.
Don't play with me. I'm real.
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NoLessons
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Re: I, Too, Am Real
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by Serendippitty on
Monday, 27th March 2006 @ 10:55:23 PM AEST
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| you're first attempt was pretty good |
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Re: I, Too, Am Real
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by SpellofNature on
Monday, 27th March 2006 @ 11:07:11 PM AEST
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| I enjoyed the style of this first attempt. Keep up the poetry! |
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Re: I, Too, Am Real
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 28th March 2006 @ 01:04:46 AM AEST
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Painful poem here, full of feelings. I will pray and things will turn out the best for you. You expressed deep feelings in your poem. Keep writing my friend.
Welcome to YPDC.
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Re: I, Too, Am Real
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by JGB on
Friday, 7th April 2006 @ 06:58:53 PM AEST
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I'm real too and this one touched me.
It's a good write.
Good luck with your writting! |
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