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When My Forever Ends
Contributed by
crimson_regret420
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Monday, 27th March 2006 @ 07:54:27 PM in AEST
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No one should have to feel this way,
A bitter feeling of love and loss,
A coffin that now holds my heart,
To have him back, I wouldn’t care the cost,
This day is far too surreal for living,
A love like yours can never be topped,
Cold and pale among a crowd of black,
The tears, I fear, will never be stopped,
Cry away the day, a liquid love,
Thought we would be together forever,
I hope you the best wherever you are,
Death is the most epic endeavor,
A grieving gravestone with your name,
A frostbitten wind, no comfort it lends,
My numb mind can think only one thing,
This is the day when my forever ends.
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Re: When My Forever Ends
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 27th March 2006 @ 07:58:54 PM AEST
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| Short and to the point that holds alot of emotion. Its hard to find inspiration from something else when all you feel is pain and loss of the one you love. I know how you feel for i am going through the same thoughts and emotions. Hope that everything works out for you. |
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Re: When My Forever Ends
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by NoLessons on
Monday, 27th March 2006 @ 10:52:37 PM AEST
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| Powerful |
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Re: When My Forever Ends
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by Serendippitty on
Monday, 27th March 2006 @ 11:03:27 PM AEST
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| nice write... i feel the emotion |
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Re: When My Forever Ends
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by needs_change on
Tuesday, 28th March 2006 @ 12:21:49 AM AEST
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WOW!! i really really like this poem. it gets the point across great. it really hits home...
awsome awsome wright...
keep up the good work! |
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Re: When My Forever Ends
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by Aeris030388 on
Thursday, 30th March 2006 @ 05:58:14 AM AEST
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| This really touched me and put me in mind of the love I lost. Thank you. |
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Re: When My Forever Ends
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by aegurly on
Saturday, 1st April 2006 @ 12:29:46 AM AEST
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So great i'm goin' through the same thing i loved it check mine out
"I Miss You"
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Re: When My Forever Ends
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by Tiffyo4 on
Saturday, 1st April 2006 @ 01:10:29 PM AEST
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very good short and to the point
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