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Do you love me

Contributed by Supafreak575 on Monday, 27th March 2006 @ 06:23:35 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Do you love me?
Or do you not
Could we ever be?
Or am I just a dot

These feelings you give me
I can not explain
Do you give me pleasure?
Or do you give me pain?

Why do you toy with me?
This isn’t fair
I gave you my heart
and you don’t even care

Do you care?
I can’t tell
If you date me is it just a dare
man, this is hell

The fire of hell burns in your eyes
are you for real
or all you all lies

Dwell in a lovers eyes
as Shakespeare one said
though he’s never met you for I
Dwell in a lovers lies

I wish they were real
all these feelings you give
they are sealed
they make me want to live

A burst of love
the laughter from the
the innocence of a dove
this is how you are towards me

We are going too fast
or not at all
we are still friends
all we can do is stall

Do you love me?
Or do you not
Could we ever be?
Or am I just a dot

These feelings you give me
I can not explain
Do you give me pleasure?
Or do you give me pain?

Copyright Â© Supafreak575 ... [ 2006-03-27 18:23:35]
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Re: Do you love me (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 27th March 2006 @ 06:43:21 PM AEST
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Question of the day it seems. I know how you feel for i am in a position where i wander the same thing. Hope everything works out and they don't break your heart. Good write

Re: Do you love me (User Rating: 1 )
by needs_change on Tuesday, 28th March 2006 @ 12:26:20 AM AEST
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i love it!
~mandie

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