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Tears of the night
Contributed by
princess-of-rock
on
Monday, 27th March 2006 @ 05:11:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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She weeps
The night drenched
Solitary
Nobody sees
She silently bleeds
Holding herself
Holding onto sanity
She screams
Echoing through the night
Wanting him
Arms wrapped round
Tight
Crying into his chest
Sobbing
His lips
Kiss away the venom
His touch
Wipes away the agony
She looks up
The memory gone
Realizing
She can’t get relief
From the source
From the very reason
She cries
Her soul dying
Slowly
Painfully
Alone
Copyright ©
princess-of-rock
... [
2006-03-27 17:11:10] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Tears of the night
(User Rating: 1 ) by hardcoreputa on
Monday, 27th March 2006 @ 06:08:07 PM AEST (User
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wow. the pain of being abandoned and alone can be so hard to deal with. you express yourself so well in this poem. keep writing ~Apryl |
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Re: Tears of the night
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Monday, 27th March 2006 @ 06:24:33 PM AEST (User
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Wow so much emotion in such a short write. Excellent write. Know this feeling a little to well. Enjoyed reading this |
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Re: Tears of the night
(User Rating: 1 ) by darkangeleyes57 on
Tuesday, 28th March 2006 @ 11:38:54 AM AEST (User
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I loved this.. It was wicked good. I liked everything about it.. Great poem..
take care
christina |
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Re: Tears of the night
(User Rating: 1 ) by no_1nos_me on
Tuesday, 28th March 2006 @ 06:47:06 PM AEST (User
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Nice stuff |
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