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Broken Synapses Fusing Together
Contributed by
Autumn19
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Sunday, 26th March 2006 @ 10:51:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
drugabuse
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Freezing cold and burning up
Twisting tight yet still unraveling
This putrid scent of brain cells flying
Forces me to feel insane
I hate it, love it, love it more
I cant relax and I cant stay still
I suffer slowly laughter bubbling
I cant escape this heavenly hell
Forever entrapped in this lose it all game
Running in circles I just cannot stop
Screaming for help yet begging for more
Falling facedown in this bloody whirlpool of life
Can you see me anymore?
Am I fading away?
Where did I go?
Where can I go?
Copyright ©
Autumn19
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2006-03-26 22:51:44]
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Re: Broken Synapses Fusing Together
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by Mild_Tempest on
Monday, 27th March 2006 @ 12:04:53 AM AEST
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| "Heavenly hell" that nicely describes everything in the poem. Nice way to combine extremeties together. I enjoyed the poem. |
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Re: Broken Synapses Fusing Together
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by bakacaka on
Monday, 27th March 2006 @ 12:11:56 AM AEST
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| It reminds me of the sadistic nature of my life |
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Re: Broken Synapses Fusing Together
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Monday, 27th March 2006 @ 09:54:54 AM AEST
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Life is all about experiences, some are good, some are bad.
Whatever they are, if we make it through them they seem to make us stronger
Good luck
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Re: Broken Synapses Fusing Together
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by Alina on
Monday, 27th March 2006 @ 08:24:15 PM AEST
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WOW! I loved this! The second stanza within itself is all wonderful and the last two lines are completley understandable, of loss and confusion and someone seeking help. I totally feel you on this one
ALINA |
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