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The Dreamer's Eye
Contributed by
whiteleo1984
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Sunday, 26th March 2006 @ 05:38:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Yea, I've got the fire's eye
it engulfs my soul in sorrow
burning it's way thru my emptiness
leaving my world in ashes...
Yet, there is another side of me
that will extinguish that flame
and smile and be happy
thru all my days
that's the side the world should see
that's the side of love that is in me
I don't show it very much
cause I feel helpless when I do
I'm not sure if it's around everyone
maybe only you
but I've got that good side in me
that I thought was long gone
and yet, you woke him up
and for that I thank you
and I leave the world with this
but more than the world, just especially for you
I've seen your dreamer's eye
and I like it, so let it be known...
Copyright ©
whiteleo1984
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2006-03-26 17:38:26]
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Re: The Dreamer's Eye
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by hardcoreputa on
Sunday, 26th March 2006 @ 06:05:36 PM AEST
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| a lot of times we focus on the fires eye, its good to hear about this side as well. your words are very true. i hope they continue to bring this side out of you, and that you feel free to show this side more often great write ~Apryl |
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Re: The Dreamer's Eye
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by Alison on
Sunday, 26th March 2006 @ 06:52:17 PM AEST
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| oh really? so the tables have turned i see. i'm now write'n about the darkness and you are write'n about the light! haha. never would have seen that come'n. awesome write, very true and great feeling in it. |
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