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Butterfly
Contributed by
Jen54
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Sunday, 26th March 2006 @ 05:37:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Poor little butterfly
Locked inside a cage
All you wanted was some love
Not an early grave
Poor little butterfly
Please don't cry
Your day of freedom will come
And you'll fly once again
Copyright ©
Jen54
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2006-03-26 17:37:47]
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Re: Butterfly
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by Tiffyo4 on
Sunday, 26th March 2006 @ 05:40:57 PM AEST
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| dude i have read this but good poem though |
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Re: Butterfly
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by no_1nos_me on
Sunday, 26th March 2006 @ 05:42:10 PM AEST
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| nice |
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Re: Butterfly
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by hardcoreputa on
Sunday, 26th March 2006 @ 06:02:05 PM AEST
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| i've met a lot of great people in the ward. sounds like she has a broken wing, but it will heal, and then she will be able to fly even higher. great poem keep writing ~Apryl |
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Re: Butterfly
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 26th March 2006 @ 06:16:05 PM AEST
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Lovely write.....well done..
Jenni |
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Re: Butterfly
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Monday, 27th March 2006 @ 09:34:24 AM AEST
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Short and sweet but the impact is very much there with this one
Well done
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Re: Butterfly
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by Spazzo on
Sunday, 2nd April 2006 @ 09:37:27 PM AEST
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Nice poem, I can relate to this one too.
Take care.
Scott |
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