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forgiveable
Contributed by
Tiffyo4
on
Sunday, 26th March 2006 @ 05:34:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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the one i know as my bestfriend
was my first true love
but she changed her mind
and left me for a a true thug
why can't i be the one for her
just like in the end of a fairy tale
the love of my life is gone
not just from my heart but from my soul
i wish things would go back to normal
before i bleed and die to nite
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Tiffyo4
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2006-03-26 17:34:56]
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Re: forgiveable
(User Rating: 1 )
by no_1nos_me on
Sunday, 26th March 2006 @ 05:46:45 PM AEST
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| nice but she's not truly gone just a lil distant |
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Re: forgiveable
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by Jen54 on
Sunday, 26th March 2006 @ 05:49:31 PM AEST
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| its great. and he is right i am not gone just a little distant. |
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