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The Fires Eye.
Contributed by
Alison
on
Sunday, 26th March 2006 @ 04:51:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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I have seen fires eye,
When something is placed,
On the simmering pile deep within,
Everything I see is set ablaze,
To me this fire is pure,
Burning all that is,
All it needs to survive is the breath in my lungs,
When it starts all will be consumed,
Everything burns within me,
And I set it out on all I see,
Fire so strong it will not be stopped,
Red, orange, blue, and yellow,
Hate, anguish, sorrow, and fear,
Burning, torching, all that is me,
So out of my own eye,
I do set the world to flames,
This all encompassing force,
That I can not control,
And has never been fully extinguished,
The fires eye becomes my own,
For this I wish I could die,
To place my outside where my inside already is,
In the never ending fire,
That lies within me.
For I can see the fires eye.
Copyright ©
Alison
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2006-03-26 16:51:09]
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Re: The Fires Eye.
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by hardcoreputa on
Sunday, 26th March 2006 @ 05:06:39 PM AEST
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| this is a completely amazing poem. you create the fire that feeds off of you and makes it seem like the whole world is burning. so much to grab out of this poem. truely great keep writing |
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Re: The Fires Eye.
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by whiteleo1984 on
Sunday, 26th March 2006 @ 05:30:29 PM AEST
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| very amazing... u actually hit it right on the mark, but i bet u dont kno bout the other eye that is known |
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Re: The Fires Eye.
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by no_1nos_me on
Monday, 27th March 2006 @ 02:26:02 PM AEST
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| pardon my word choice, but that some hot stuff. we all have some burning force with in us all and you gave people a glimps of yours |
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