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Contributed by
jamielynn
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Sunday, 26th March 2006 @ 10:24:35 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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go away, leave
that's all you ever do
I tell you everything important to me and you leave
well I guess I will too
I'll leave, I'll go away
never to be seen again
you say you care
but you don't the only thing you ever do is think about yourself
what if i told you I've thought
about killing myself
and I've cut myself
so there
do you care now
you know what just go, leave
no wait stay, I'll leave
leave to hell
cause god won't let me in
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jamielynn
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2006-03-26 10:24:35]
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Re: leave
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 26th March 2006 @ 12:40:26 PM AEST
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| bored me to tears too. try varying things and including some vivid imagery to mix it up a little bit. chris. |
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Re: leave
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by shelby on
Sunday, 26th March 2006 @ 01:08:09 PM AEST
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very emotional write. THough cutting and killing yourself isnt the answer. If he is the one to leave, you need to be bigger and gather your strength and move on. There are people in our life that are keepers and others that we need to be rid of. I sense you are young. There is alot of life out there reach out and grab it.
Michelle |
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