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pilot no purpose
Contributed by
drewgreeno
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Sunday, 26th March 2006 @ 12:13:15 AM in AEST
Topic:
political
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our dawn is the sky of falling stars
driven by blind men, believers in hopeless wars
our day is the empty ground covered in corruption
collective corpses that cannot scream to stop
our disease is clouded by rashes and riddles
their meaning unheard until the words are etched in stone
our danger is this sadness, the dark relative ruled by melancholy
slowly stealing the sand from the hourglass until it's too late
staring at the whores bathing in the suns carbon myth
//Ae
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drewgreeno
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2006-03-26 00:13:15]
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Re: pilot no purpose
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by hardcoreputa on
Sunday, 26th March 2006 @ 05:19:12 PM AEST
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| very true. that last line was so beautifuly constructed. can't wait to read more of your poetry. |
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Re: pilot no purpose
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by drewgreeno on
Sunday, 26th March 2006 @ 05:28:21 PM AEST
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Thanks for the positive feedback! :)
Drew
http://blog.360.yahoo.com/drew.greeno |
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