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Braille
Contributed by
twick
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Saturday, 25th March 2006 @ 08:56:22 PM in AEST
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Bandages soaked in blood
invisible to the average eye
Regular occurences they try to hide
They're screaming for something
but not sure what
or they want be like everyone else
pour the blood
shallow cuts
that remember not to go too deep
because they will bleed and bleed.
Helpless hunger
too afraid to stop
wearing bandages until they rot
understand this wounded affliction?
could we really
maybe we could read the healed incisions.
Copyright ©
twick
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2006-03-25 20:56:22]
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Re: Braille
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by TheKid on
Saturday, 25th March 2006 @ 08:57:29 PM AEST
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| Nice write... Keep it up! |
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Re: Braille
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 26th March 2006 @ 07:27:25 AM AEST
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Re: Braille
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by bakacaka on
Monday, 27th March 2006 @ 12:00:22 AM AEST
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| It's reminds me of myself except the people in my life can't read (braille). It's a great poem. |
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Re: Braille
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by drtylilsecret on
Thursday, 16th November 2006 @ 03:10:31 AM AEST
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you told teardrops to take a look at this poem and that got me curious....very good write, from someone looking in from the sidelines. there's a rawness to it i always love in poetry, and an honesty that's sometimes lacking. i loved it, gonna have to read more.
--talli |
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