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Intervals of Night
Contributed by
ladyfawn
on
Friday, 31st January 2003 @ 04:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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My heart has come away like the
Layers of an archtichoke, slowly peeled
in great pain now, it lay open quite raw.
God the pain blinds my mind as I wake
in the night, the heart shall not be mended.
Beautiful and wonderful was the love of my
dear one.
Oh so full of life, he stole my heart away
My days pass by me in the sad music of life
Ever I shall pray my beloved's soul due peace
And ask God's blessings, and might he know how so
he's missed.
Great aching of my soul, left behind to make
children's dreams come to life. Even in death I
find loyalty and truth upon my heart from my
dear one.
My heart has come away from it's core. Ever,-
shall I gain balance, as the layers die ? Cruel
the grief that eats still away at the raw heart.
Alas, now I know why I shall wake at intervals
of night.
Ness Aug.92'
Copyright © ladyfawn 2001
Copyright ©
ladyfawn
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2003-01-31 16:20:00]
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Re: Intervals of Night
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by LovingWhispers on
Friday, 31st January 2003 @ 07:30:48 PM AEST
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| Excellently written!! Love remebered can be very painful....yet if it was real love......no matter what,we always wish them best.You have captured the very rawness of such emotions.BRAVO!!! |
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Re: Intervals of Night
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by aernby on
Friday, 31st January 2003 @ 09:35:16 PM AEST
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a courageous write,
well done
blessings on your pain
aern + |
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Re: Intervals of Night
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by venkat on
Saturday, 1st February 2003 @ 01:07:32 AM AEST
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| wellwritten.. " heart has come away from its core " ..ahha.. a cute statement.the poem is very nice. venkat |
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Re: Intervals of Night
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by The_Phantom on
Saturday, 1st February 2003 @ 01:20:05 AM AEST
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Another great write, I'm a fan, enjoyed it keep it up.
The Phantom |
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Re: Intervals of Night
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by karoody on
Friday, 7th February 2003 @ 11:01:46 PM AEST
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| You have great talent. I have read happy and sad poetry of yours....The emotion comes alive in both. definitely moving. |
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Re: Intervals of Night
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by sunflower on
Thursday, 20th February 2003 @ 06:53:25 AM AEST
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| moving and sad, and noble still |
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