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Kill me for love
Contributed by
hopefades
on
Saturday, 25th March 2006 @ 07:38:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Stay here with me
Even if it means cutting into my flesh
And sowing yourself into the cuts you made
Comfort me
Even if you have to whisper sweet words into a bullet
Put the gun to my head cock is and pull it
Hold me tight
Even if you have to pull me form life
Touch my hand
Even if it means driving a nail through my palm
While you touch the dieing flesh
Kiss me hard
Even if that means taking needle and thread
Sowing our lips together as the bleed red
Be mine
Even if you have to kill me
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hopefades
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2006-03-25 19:38:10]
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Re: Kill me for love
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by drtylilsecret on
Saturday, 25th March 2006 @ 08:04:38 PM AEST
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omg creeeepy! really dark, beautifully written.
~natalya |
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Re: Kill me for love
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by twick on
Saturday, 25th March 2006 @ 09:01:30 PM AEST
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| nice, it made me think of some song lyrics. I like that you didn't shy away from the darkness. I know that sounds cheesy but it really gives the poem some power. |
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Re: Kill me for love
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by hardcoreputa on
Sunday, 26th March 2006 @ 05:42:52 PM AEST
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| very dark. the things we will do to feal loved. great write. best of wishes ~Apryl |
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Re: Kill me for love
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by Amaterian_Angel on
Monday, 27th March 2006 @ 06:28:10 AM AEST
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| I've been feeling a similar way recently and you took the words from my life. A beautiful, compelling poem. Well done! |
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Re: Kill me for love
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by no_1nos_me on
Monday, 27th March 2006 @ 01:41:40 PM AEST
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| wow that was too tight |
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Re: Kill me for love
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by summer on
Wednesday, 29th March 2006 @ 11:30:48 PM AEST
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| Wow !Beautiful poem well done X |
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