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Hand Made God
Contributed by
Opium
on
Friday, 31st January 2003 @ 04:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Valor - of humans found in their Gods
Believe - in simply two crossed rods
Values - lost what we must live for
Ignorance - no reasoning evermore
Blind - devotion rotting your brain
Pain - and suffering for nothing to gain
Darkness - subsiding from above
Lies - redemption found in love?
Desires - forbidden thoughts of Evil's deeds
Lust - in every soul, ignore your vital needs
Touch - dare not to lay a hand
Beauty - designed in a skin strand
Deny - what contradicts your believes
Hate - he who hides his bereaves
Think - of what might look just odd
Kneel - before your hand-made God
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Re: Hand Made God
(User Rating: 1 ) by Icequeen on
Friday, 31st January 2003 @ 04:18:12 PM AEST (User
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Interesting, like it :) |
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Re: Hand Made God
(User Rating: 1 ) by Rakerman1999 on
Monday, 3rd February 2003 @ 02:35:24 PM AEST (User
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My good friend......you have put all the bad in humanity before us in a way that should make us all take a hard look. It isnt religion, or God, that is at fault. It's mans demented views of what his "God or religion" wants. I think you have a write for the ages here buddy.
Larry |
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