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Breathe
Contributed by
rogergouldnc
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Saturday, 25th March 2006 @ 05:34:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I paitently await the next moment,
Counting each breath.
Until I can shut out the whole world,
And stare into your eyes,
Thus perfecting my existance.
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2006-03-25 17:34:56]
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Re: Breathe
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by drtylilsecret on
Saturday, 25th March 2006 @ 05:51:38 PM AEST
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you've said a mouthfull with just 5 lines, amazing job.
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Re: Breathe
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by Caged Soul on
Tuesday, 9th May 2006 @ 01:42:49 AM AEST
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Hi Roger
Carolyn must be some lady if she can make you feel this way. This was very beautiful and sweet * can't believe I just said sweet again; gotta get that word out of my vocab*.....but yeah, it was really cool.
Keep them writes comming
Ash |
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